The Sex Addict : The End
This fiction has been removed except for a brief chapter preview. oz is in talks with various parties for publishing his work and hence The MBA GANG and The Sex Addict have been taken down.
Chapter 3 : The Eye off the I destroys the I
“This is Jay Thakore. I’m not in. Please leave your message after the beep.”
“Jay, this is Dr. Tripathi. Call me as soon as you get this message”
I rushed from the bathroom to grab my clothes.
She was still in bed. Grocery shopping led to us crashing our shopping carts. She was a beautiful brunette with blue eyes and it got me asking her what she was looking for. Annette and I took a break from shopping for a round of coffee. Six hours later I was pulling her hair in her bed while entering her beautiful porcelain skin body from behind.
“Do me Doc. Do me hard… Oh God I haven’t been taken in such a long time… ”
And she begged me to do her hard. Annette was on fire. Her blue eyes…
SHIT!!! Jay had banged Annette… his words at our session, were replaying in my mind… I pulled out of Annette, grabbed my cell phone and rushed to the bathroom to call him. WHO THE FUCK WAS JAY THAKORE?
June 6th, 2006 at 12:25 pm
Good one. :d
June 6th, 2006 at 12:39 pm
Nicely written:)>-
June 6th, 2006 at 12:39 pm
oz Note: Winners of the Sex addict contest may realize that the climax is different from what they had predicted. Well, I changed the climax from the original draft. Their answers were right but from my view the winners and those who guessed the right answer would not have enjoyed the last chapter. The change in the climax is to let them have as much fun over the twists and turns as the rest of the readers.
- Sonal, Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. :)
June 6th, 2006 at 1:03 pm
oz,
First of al lemme congratulate u on a brilliant work. Very good story, liked the way u clubbed past event to the present ones and how the no no no no thingy merged it. it was so very visual. Also u r a man of ur words oz, yesterday i had reminded u of the last episode of sex addict and u had said it wud be up in 24, and bang on the clock were u.. 24 right there
June 6th, 2006 at 2:18 pm
rocking OZ!!!!!
u r super cool ;)
June 6th, 2006 at 2:22 pm
;)
June 6th, 2006 at 3:33 pm
Superb oz…Real good ending…Bravo…^:)^
June 6th, 2006 at 4:26 pm
Awesome :)>-
Though its unfortunate to miss out on the winners purse due to time differences :((
Believe it or not, my answer too would have been split personas… though I couldnt have predicted the end completely
June 6th, 2006 at 7:31 pm
Impressive … it was a good read, however I did sense the plot circling the idea from the movie ‘Identity’ — John Cusack — but I may be purely hallucinating…..:-?
June 6th, 2006 at 9:03 pm
- Ani, Chandni, N, VC, - Thank you ^:)^
- Sumeet, Thanks. and Thanks for the compliments but nah… on other days I’m such a lazy bum |-)
- Nirav, Surprisingly none of the winners are from the US!
- Jug, Bingo! I had that movie in mind (along with Tyler Durden in Fight Club) when I was designing the main character! But there’s a difference. John Cusack the character did not exist, it was all in the mind. Here, Jay Thakore does exist!!! All I did was add another layer of illusion over the supposed to be fictional character in both the movies and Voila! :d
June 6th, 2006 at 9:40 pm
ha ha…you got me there. Was just wondering as to how the ending changed. Then I read you note in the comments!
Brilliant stuff ^:)^
June 6th, 2006 at 11:30 pm
Oz bhai…simply mind-blowing.And the twisted change in the predicted ending was the cherry on the cake. I take back all my words of black-n-white colours. Boss you are the best.