The Sex Addict : Penultimate Chapter
This fiction has been removed except for a brief chapter preview. oz is in talks with various parties for publishing his work and hence The MBA GANG and The Sex Addict have been taken down.
[Heads Up: Extremely graphic content]
Chapter Two : Life is a dot in the I of Infinity
Did you sleep well last night?
Yes I did.
Good. Any dreams that you remember?
Yes. It was kind of frightening though.
What happened?
Well I stood there in this huge farm. There are these bright golden colored wheat fields all around me. I’m standing there completely naked, and I just keep standing there. I try to walk, but can’t move my feet. Even my hands are still and I can’t seem to move them.
Why couldn’t you move them?
Don’t know. My whole body stood there still. I tried hard to walk or shake my hands or bend down, but just couldn’t do it.
What happened then?
I feel a soft slimy thing on my back that starts moving from the base of my spine and curving up to the back of my neck, very slowly. I get very afraid. I try to move my hands to feel the thing but my hands are locked still.
Did you find what that sensation was?
Yes. The feeling moves up and then winds around my neck. And then it comes in front and looks in my eye. Its a dark deep reddish-black snake, about 25 feet long and I feel as if its giving me a very evil grin.
May 31st, 2006 at 4:41 pm
Awww….amazing write up. Looks like your screenplay class is working well in practical.:)
Now don’t make us wait for long, for the next part:-w
May 31st, 2006 at 6:35 pm
awesome
May 31st, 2006 at 9:34 pm
Brilliant! ^:)^
June 1st, 2006 at 1:45 am
whats the black background??
June 1st, 2006 at 4:25 am
Can we have another “Guess the climax” (no pun intended) contest? I have a hunch what it could be.
June 2nd, 2006 at 12:50 am
Ozbhai, why is the story so black and white ?
Can’t we have some shades of grey too.
And no more guess the climax pls. Had a hunch but was thinking Oz bhai is going to pull something more brilliant. Looks like will have to wait for the next story for more darker colours .And for sex addict I will reserve my other comments for the last chapter.But just a one liner before signing off : Your narration style is photographically brilliant.
June 2nd, 2006 at 3:38 am
Awesm Oz…. :o