The MBA GANG : Penultimate Chapter
This fiction has been removed except for a brief chapter preview. oz is in talks with various parties for publishing his work and hence The MBA GANG and The Sex Addict have been taken down.
[ WARNING : Please do not read the comments before reading this chapter. It will spoil the fun :-) ]
Chapter Eight : Learn to Enjoy your Success
“Bye Bye Bhenchodâ€
Yadav raised his gun and pointed it at Neha’s forehead. Neha had started crying. If this was the extreme point of fear, then she had reached it, and was now racing beyond it.
“Please please please…â€
May 12th, 2006 at 5:39 pm
Now we copy all the chapters in one big word file. Print it and then read it again. and this time very slowly.
Congrats OZ. This was amazing. Better than Ocean 11. Although I always think Ocean 11 is an overrated film.
Con at its best
Congrats. Now we go to the next novel.
[EDITED]
Punds
May 12th, 2006 at 5:50 pm
- Punds, Boss!!! ^:)^ the end chapter baki hain. Just want to show what the charaters are doing now. Sorry about editing your comment. Just moved the “revelation” line to the end of your comment. Don’t mind hu :>
May 12th, 2006 at 6:27 pm
Hey Punds, I actually did the word thing. Its now 43 pages officially.
Oz bhai, the twist is really hard to digest man!
[EDITED]
May 12th, 2006 at 9:17 pm
Amazing work OZ bhai..
Really if i had enough money, i would love to direct this script of yours… but unfortunately.. i dont have that much money to direct a movie except the passion..
Raj..
May 13th, 2006 at 12:42 am
enchanting. one of the smoothest and most refined cons i’ve ever read/seen - DT readers are the biggest winners. pure class, ozzie, thank you!
May 13th, 2006 at 2:46 am
End chapter baki hai???? wrong comment?
Aur bhi hai?
Sahi!
I don’t mind you editing the comment. Actually I don’t remember what I wrote. It was just the emotion of the moment
Punds
May 13th, 2006 at 3:55 am
Amazing :)
So no one gets the t-shirt or the dinner, eh?
May 13th, 2006 at 11:32 am
hmmn clever use of words.. [EDITED]..
MBA gang gets $440 million not 450 right? and “why” is $100 million put back into Swiss bank? right from starting they are told about sharing 450 and 550 mln, so 100 goes to J for masterminding?
now unless there is a bigger twist, you just have to wrap up by joining the loose ends.. like Cigar club relation and Ashwin’s surprise in car..
ok wait, I somehow feel what you are telling is not what exactly is happening. Waiting for the finishing chapter..
May 13th, 2006 at 3:04 pm
damn!!!!!!!!!
i never even realsised that there was nothing mentioned anywhere about [EDITED]…
What a marvel, the english language!!!
May 14th, 2006 at 2:55 am
~Manoj~
(blank message signifies I’m speechless!)
May 14th, 2006 at 8:17 am
- Ravi, ah!!! It can be (hard to digest), just try connecting the dots… I see that Pavan already did… lemme know what questions are bothering you with the concept. Perhaps we can simplify the screenplay.
- Raj, Thank you.
- WB, Thanks to you guys for pushing me to write this one.
- Punds, Yeah the last chapter attempts to connect the missing dots and lets the reader know what the present situation of the gang.
- Nirav, No, but some of the answers were right on target for what will be revealed in the last chapter. For those guys, I’ll buy a round of drinks when you land in So Cal.
- Pavan, You noticed!!!!! LOL!!! Oh my my the expectations are gonna drive me nuts!!! You are right, the last chapter ties those few loose ends.
The amounts seem to be right. 5
- Chandni, Thanks!
- Manoj, Well that is a big compliment in itself. Thank you!!!
May 14th, 2006 at 7:58 pm
Oz bhai,you’ve done it.That was the most un-predictable twist in the story that we DT readers cuold’ve ever guessed. Looking for the ultimate chapter to find out what were the painful memories J had with the 3Ms that made her do this.And once again Oz bhai you Rock.
May 15th, 2006 at 12:58 pm
whoa man !!! what runs in that mind of urs ? heh …