The MBA GANG : Chapter Six
This fiction has been removed except for a brief chapter preview. oz is in talks with various parties for publishing his work and hence The MBA GANG and The Sex Addict have been taken down.
Chapter Six : The Art of Flawless Execution
Saturday evening.
Yadav was in deep thought. These people had planned it out too perfectly. Someone inside must have given them all the info. Details of the account, about Modi, Mahapatra, Moopanar, about the politicians… but who?
Trying to unravel a mystery by himself wasn’t one of Yadav’s strengths. He was born and raised to be a brawn. Brains weren’t anywhere brought into the picture in his upbringing. Modi had noticed Yadav when he worked as a party worker in Gorakhpur. A month later he had moved to Delhi to be Modi’s strong arm that was used to twist, turn and at times kill to keep the highway to riches clean, smooth, pure and above all discreet.
He bent down towards Neha, who sat on the marble floor. The blood flowing from the wounds she had at the corner of her lips and her eye, had dried up.
“So how many of you are in this?”
“Four”
“Where’s the fourth? I’ve seen you, this banker and the half bald guy - your husband… Where’s the fourth guy?”
Neha paused. Yadav had seen her, he knew Atanu, who lay on the floor, dead or unconscious, Neha wasn’t aware of it as yet; and lastly Yadav had seen MK, who right now was being held by the 3 Ms at Gujarat House. Yadav still had not seen Sumanth nor knew of his existence.
I hope Sumanth is back. I hope he’s back. God… please let him come here and help me out… God, please show me a miracle…
Yadav pointed the gun at Neha and in a slow menancing voice asked here again…
“WHERE…. IS… THE… FOURTH…. PERSON… ?”
“He’s in Madras”
“What’s he doing there?”
“Waiting for us”
“So you were planning to fly to Madras tonight. Then what?”
“He would take us to Switzerland by tomorrow morning flight. He had arranged for our passports under different names”
“Ah the legal way to get passports for a name that does not exist”
“Yes”
“From where did he arrange those passports?”
“Lucknow”
One drop of truth. Four drops of lies. Inspite of all the fear Neha was enveloped in, she was managing quite well to lie about Sumanth’s whereabouts.
I hope he is on his way back. Is he in trouble? Did something happen to Sumanth? Dhanpur is about 14 hours from Delhi. He should be back by now…
May 9th, 2006 at 6:34 pm
It gets better and better……nice job Oz
May 9th, 2006 at 8:18 pm
yes, it is getting better and better. Good job
May 9th, 2006 at 10:01 pm
The descriptions are getting better and better. I can actually picturize the house in Dhanpur, the old lady, the room with the files and even the stranger entering towards the end.
Great work…=d>
~Manoj~
P.S. about the comments on my blog, I did get the one on Pink Panther. I am planning to move my blog to some other site. You could not see your comments coz anonymous comments need to be unscreened by me…kinda weird !
May 9th, 2006 at 10:26 pm
where did you hide the remaining chapters oz? in a locked room in your house, haan? I HAVE to dig them. This is by far the best chapter of all. Plz finish it, I cant take it anymore.
I somehow felt this was written before chapter 5.. or even 4?
and btw one query: “.. and he is giving you access to put money in his account since you at present are unable to open one for yourself.. am I missing something or is it my weekend madness, or an innocent typo?
May 9th, 2006 at 10:26 pm
had to comment this time…this was the best part till now which left me craving for more, like never before….
gr8 job….
May 9th, 2006 at 10:28 pm
Manoj, could I suggest you Wordpress if you are seriously intending to shift..? it’s nice and better than blogger.. do you need an invite?
May 9th, 2006 at 10:53 pm
Bdamas bank……..is it a misspelt Badmash bank!!! Just wondering, it would be a nice touch….. all the crooks put their money in Badmash bank. LOL!!!!
I am hooked to the Gang, jaldi jaldi please with the rest.
May 9th, 2006 at 10:58 pm
God this just gets more interesting….!
May 9th, 2006 at 11:13 pm
UJ, yep. That, and Issey Miyake is a camouflaged “iski maaki”. Booya!
May 9th, 2006 at 11:37 pm
Hey UJ, please ignore my previous comment if you can, mate… I now find it very disgusting. Apologia!
Bhai log, Just got out of a meeting, where the team and I had the world’s greatest shave. The less I think about it now, the better.
Oz, I am organizing an ad hoc daaru session for the team in half hour (it’s 4:40P in Sydney and the weather out side is just right for a large JW on the rocks). Kuch bhi ho sakta hain!
May 10th, 2006 at 6:59 am
Oz bhai tussi tope ho,
Desi bloggers da hope ho.
Had to comment on this 6-th installment.Listening to your art of story-telling is like watching a movie.Other than how the characters look like,you leave very little to reader’s imagination.Liked your eye for details.Now waiting eagerly for 7-th one,8-th one.Don’t make us wait for long :d
May 10th, 2006 at 8:30 am
You guys are cracking me up =)) I fell off my chair while reading your comments this early morning. Almost had Starbucks leave a stain on my shirt. I must say this is the best batch of comments I’ve seen in a long time. Great one liners!!!
- Manoj, Thanks! I know but seems like Wordpress is a good option.
- Pavan, Actually you are quite close to getting to know my secret. Well here it is: I write a story in the “reverse” order. So I begin with the climax, pre climax, the cum before the pre-climax… wait a minute what are talking about here? :-?
Its not a typo, just a fault on my part. The line is a bit confusing as I tried to stuff it with too many explanations.
- UJ, You, Pavan and WB are in top gear today. How the hell did you decipher Bdamas!!!!! >:)
- Gayatri, Thanks!
- WB, Holy Shit!!! That is some fucking line dude!!!! Care to help me out on my next fiction? I better fly down to Sydney. The beautiful Sydney blondes, the beach and WB’s punch liners can lead to us to making a bestseller.
And no, it still is Issey Miyake and it’s my favorite cologne. Though now each time I use it I’ll have your comment zooming around in my head. Isske Maaki - fuck, now I can’t get it out of my head!!!
Oh and how did the JW session go after the ass belting ceremony at your work? Kuch hua?
- Bishu, Bishu-bhai tum nahin to Desi Train nahin. ! Thanks a lot!
May 16th, 2006 at 6:13 pm
Sydney is a peroxide free blonde fest, mate!
When are you planning to stop by?
BTW, I’ve scheduled a Jack&Coke session on Friday with the team - to celebrate, yet again, the $3M budget cut (the world’s greatest shave) of our program. Life’s fucking beautiful, aint it!
May 16th, 2006 at 9:36 pm
- Wb, so that’s the greatest shave you were talking about! :(( Cheer up dude, its just a dot in the whole light of life.
Now that you’ve got my attention with the words “Sydney is a peroxide free BLONDE FEST”, I’m making plans… soon pretty soon. :d